Things spun around him like merry-go-round horses. Time wavered, slow up and fast down. He tried to force the world right, saw his note.
... gun ... money ... bag ...
His bluff had failed.
Not too bad. I like some of the images, though I regretted the "force the world right" line about two days into it. I think I could have made better use of other words. Ah well.
Forcing an Attention Span
This one was successful. I managed to keep my easily distracted mind on one story for an entire month, rather than diverging when it wasn't working. I was pretty pleased with at least one side effect of that. Rather than waiting weeks to find a solution to problematic scenes, I was able to figure it out within a few days. That saved some time on this particular project, which is always a bonus. The next step will be to get myself multi-tasking, so I can focus on more than one story at a time without any of them suffering from it.
Most importantly, however, all this means I get to have the snazzy certificate midnyteabbadon made for Writo de Mayo ^_^